Month: May 2016

Essay Plan – Worthy? HW5

1. Introduction. How the old man lives and how much the fish will mean to him if he catches it. For example no fish for 84 days. (Do not give my own point of view)

2. Start with saying things about how he is on his own looking for big fish. Characteristics and quotes – must be strong, skilled etc…

3. Obstacles. Cramped hand, lack of sleep, limits on water. All these reasons not making the man in a not very fit condition for catching the big fish.

4. Questions that arise from the starting question. Must everything deserve a reward? Why wouldn’t the man be worthy of the fish? What is worthiness? Was everything for nothing?

5. Conclusion? Old man is worthy of the fish. Link to characteristics. Could anyone be a survivor, does that mean they are worthy of the fish?

(Still thinking about the order of these points).

 

Perspective Of The Boy – HW 4

Being on this boat doesn’t feel the same. The old man has been with me for ages, he taught me how to fish since 5 years old. I remember it all even to today. This guy I’m on the boat with is just too strict. Getting up so early in the morning, I just need more sleep. I didn’t have to do that with the Santiago. I wonder how he is getting along today, he said that the 85th day is a lucky day. If he believes that, then I do too. When I think of it again, he didn’t come home yesterday. I guess that means he has found something good. Problem is that he is on his own, if only I was there to help. He could have found a big fish or those dentusos. Something that would also help is if this guy on the boat would stop drinking all the water. He leaves me just a drop. I just wanna shout at this guy but it’s always the same argument over and over again.                                            ‘Oi, what are you looking at?’ The man said as I was giving him an angry look.                                        ‘I saw a fish jump out the water behind you. I wasn’t looking at you.’ I said.                                             ‘Sure,’ The man said sarcastically. ‘Just go catch some fish.’                             ‘At least I can actually catch fish.’ I whispered under my breath. Luckily he didn’t hear that.

It’s barely been anytime since we set sail and there’s a huge school of fish over there. I can see small dark figures swimming about. Hopefully there is a big fish lurking around. This truly is a lucky boat if there is one nearby but it isn’t as exciting catching fish without the old man. He always sounds so cheerful and praises my skill. Then I would say everytime that it is because him I am so skilled.

Did the line just wobble? It seemed very light. I don’t really want those tiny fish, they are not worth much and not a challenge. Perhaps if I can catch some huge fish dad will let me go on Santiago’s boat for once. The sad thing is that is never happening.                                                ‘What are you doing! Look at the line instead of dreaming!’ The man said next to me.                                                    ‘Yeah, yeah.’ I said. It is really pulling now, better get hold of that before he has a go at me again. ‘Pull kid!’ The man shouted at me. I get both of my hands and start to pull up the line. I could see the fish getting closer in the water as more and more line covers the boat floor. The fish splashes out of the water. It is flopping about on the hook to try and get off.                                                   ‘It is pointless fish. The hook has already pierced you.’ I said. Might just eat this one, got some good flesh. I remember getting taught how to cut these fish the best way. Slice the head, tail and down the middle where the spine is. I turn to see the man struggling with his line. I should probably help him, otherwise I will get shouted at. As I reach for his line I stumble backwards. The boat tilted back and forth. I hear a huge splash.   I realise that the man is not on the boat anymore and look over the side to find him struggling in the water. ‘You ok? That must have been a huge fish’ I said. I wanted to mock him that he wasn’t strong but I knew I shouldn’t. At least there was not any sharks, there usually are around these waters. The only thing I don’t want to find are sharks, there were plenty of those yesterday. They are not scary anymore but still, they’re such a pain to deal with.

 

Perspective Of The Boy Plan – HW 3

The boy would…

  • Think about the Old Man, think about for how he is doing – is everything well or not.
  • Hope that the Old Man was right about the 85th day being lucky.
  • Wish how he was on the man’s boat to talk and catch fish with him.
  • Catch lots of decent sized fish as he is on the lucky boat.
  • Talk to the man he is on the boat with, he could talk about what he thinks of the old man.
  • Think about the baseball
  • Make sure not to eat or drink all the food and water, only do it when needing the strength.
  • Maybe argue with the man on the boat with him if someone does something wrong and blame each other. A reason could be because the boy is younger and could be less experienced or lacks  the strength.
  • Think what happened to the old man, why has he not come back home yet?

Theme Study 3 – True Grit

This film is a western film. The main character is a 14 year old girl named Mattie Ross who goes on a journey to take revenge of her father’s death. She knows that the killer is a man called Tom Chaney but he had fled a long way before getting caught. Mattie goes to seek help to catch Chaney and ends up finding deputy Marshall Rooster Cogburn and a Texas Ranger named LaBoeuf. There are many aspects of the theme of ruggedness such as gunfights or kill or be killed. Mattie near the start of the film straight away shows grit by crossing a deep river on her horse to catch up to Cogburn and LaBoeuf who had left her behind because they thought she would weigh them down. Many arguments occur between if she can keep going through all the dangers but it still works out. This is because Mattie has something quite special. Her convincing and arguing skills are so good. She managed to win her way with a stable master and get good bargain. The Marshall showed the most grit. He had a gunfight on horseback against four people and won with the help of the Texas Ranger’s amazing sniper shot to finish off the last guy. Even after that, Mattie is poisoned by a snake and needs treatment immediately. Cogburn rides his horse carrying Mattie for miles. Since the horse was injured from the earlier gunfight, it falls over and dies. Cogburn carries Mattie in his arms for even longer until he falls and a house is nearby. How wouldn’t all of this be grit or ruggedness with your life or someone you care abouts life on the line.